可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
My goodfriend now is living with me. My friend is ordianary in her apperance.She got light black skin,big eyes,black short hair and shinning tooth. To me,she is a very good friend.She always be positive and encourage me to smile at the troubles I meet.She is good and help me get through the hard time.I feel very thankful to her for she always help me a lot. In a word,she is such a good friend and I love her.