2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Everyone longs for success.But only a handful of them ultimately achieve it.That's because they have a strong will,which opens the door to the success. Several reasons can account for the phenomenon.Firstly,There is no royal way to success.We may encounter many difficulties on the way of pursuing success.A strong will can sustain us when we are frustrated.Secondly,one may as well not know a thing at all as know it imperfectly.A person who is not in possession of a strong will cannot focus on one thing and easily turn to another .Naturally,success will easily slip away. From my perspective,as students,it's crucial for us to work hard.Without hard work, we wouldn't achieve what we always have our eyes on.Without spirit of persistence,we wouldn't become talents who can contribute great achievements to our country.