2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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shopping online have become a faction and is more popurilar in our life.For everyone think it will save more time or energect to buy what you want ,in addition,online shop open all the day,you can buy something everytime,in a word,mang people said it have lots of benefits.In fact,shopping online also exist some problem in some aspect.For example,parts of online business existe phenomena that they cheated their comstom to get benefit,many commodity is infeori.Due to they haven't fix shop,we are difficult to protect our rights.So,in my opinion,we can enjoiy shopping online,but we more neseccary to pulish our eyes which ask us shop in great net.We can do some invegtigation on the net whether creditable before you decide buy thing.We should master important imformaton of the bussiness,you can't be cheated and provent you from injure in shopping online.