2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句。

i think a strong is important factor to ensure success .Only when people insist on their conviction ,do they get succeed.if you give up your original will in your working process,if you can not demonstrate your will,you will be failure. people who stand firmly for his belief can finish great responsibility.first,he have a industrial mind and there is always full of power in his mind.second,he is be confident in achieve his dream,he will never back down. As a student,we also should be hard-working,if we not ,we will get nothing at the end .so we should stick on our strong will and do it!