2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句。

i think a strong is important factor for us to get succeed .Only when people insist on their conviction ,do they get succeed.if you give up your original will in your working process,if you can not demonstrate your will,you will be failure. people who stand firmly for his belief can finish great responsibility.first,he have a industrial mind and there is always full of power in his mind.second,he is be confident in achieve his dream,he will never back down. As a student,we also should be hard-working,if we not ,we will get nothing at the end .so we should stick on our strong will and do it!