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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Modern people will be no stranger to computer use.Surfing the Internet,chatting online,and searching the information are probably the most common use of computers.Through computer,people interact with each other,and have a lot of fun in the virtual world. This phenomenon could be a result of the fast development of the Internet . While the computers have brought great convenience to us,it't rapid development has also aroused much concern about the man. For example ,there more and more people especially teenagers in school ,lose themselves in computer games,which directly resulting the decline in their study grades.And this problem is the biggest one that parents care most. In my point of view,it's impossible that all of us abandon to use computers, instead ,we should making good use of it,we should always remember that computer is just a tool for us,we human never be a tool of computers.

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