2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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my views online shopping.more and more people realize shopping is interesting.The online shopping have wasted money and interesting shopping.not only realistic shopping but also online shopping is today tide. I am remenber the first online shopping brounght clothing.since it I love online shopping.but i am finding it problem that it have quality problem.