Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;请注意分段。
Ladies and Gentlemen,Thank you very much for coming this meting this afternoon Now,I am going to introduce a new idea as air-conditionning how to save power.First of all, I am going to talk about market research which can develop this productions,then I can explain this productions about developing technique,producting productiona and marketing skills,finally I will offer some advice to you as the productions how to go success in the market