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Nowadays,most of us debate an idea that being careful with money is right or not.This causes different opinions about it. Above all,saving money is a good habit that we can make good use of the money in our daily life.As we know,it's more difficult for us to earn money than before,for the finacial ecomomy and other reasons.So we have to learn how to use money in a reasonable condition.Otherwise,we may get into too much trouble.Second,as the time goes,you will find that there is an increasing nubmer in your bank account.After a few years,you can do many things with it,such as buying house,car or learning.Then you will benefit a lot from it.Some people,however don't think so at all which will disturb their life and do harm their health. As far as I concered,everything has its advantage and disadvantge.What we do is that taking some measures to solve it.For example,setting a plan how to store money and use money.Also we are able to turn for help from the bank where teach us to being careful with our money.Only in this way, can we not only handle money in any time,but get a good habit of saving as well.
