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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:51浏览次数:2205
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作文题目:

Colleagues are the people who work with us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good colleague?

Use specific details and examples in your answer.

室友是跟我们一起生活的那个人。依你看,好室友是什么样的?给出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但是拼写错误比较多;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

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What qualities of colleagues should have is we all care about deeply. Because her or his qualities will be a cretical factor when we work together each other to achieve some targets. Sometime our coorperator will give our hands and reduce significantly our borden. In my opinion, A colleague, who will help you achieve some common targts, should has some important qualities. One of the key quality is team spirits. Team spirits make our coorperation smooth to work and keep in touch to exchange information, binifiting we should do work. If as a colleague do not has this team spirits, he or she just focus on what he or she do something, the whole things do not go. The second quality our colleagues should has is easy-going. A better temple will give

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