Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Now,people have rights to decide where they will be work and what they are ging to attend to work.they are face with challenge about where they should go work,they need to know what the standards demand.The book can offer some useful advice as worker how to make a variety of decisions.At the same time,through reading this book,they can know how to make questions,what they need and how to make a finnal decisions