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Presently,there are many parents doing everything for their kids.For example ,when the kids want to own some new and fashsionable clothes regardless of the prices,their parents may try their best to buy it .What is more ,there are some parents cleaning their children's dormitory. It's the behavior that is not good to the growth of children.First,the kids may don't know how important the money is and they may waste the money.Second,the kids may lose the ability to live in the society.For example,they don't know how to wash clothes,clean the dorm and tidy up their living goods. Because of these disadvantages of the behavior ,I think that the parents shouldn't do everything for their kids.In order to make children be independent.parents are supposed to let their children to arrange their life and make them experience some difficulties.
