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College is a crucial period in our life. During the four years, I have acquired abundant professional knowledge, a variety of practical skills and some work experience. I also build up a good interpersonal relationship and get to the meaning of teamwork. As for me, I think highly of what I have learnt in college. I firmly believed that they will bring huge benefits to my future life. First and foremost, I think the professional knowledge is the most significant, when I grab it well, I can easily find a job in a certain field. It is a common phenomenon that some people attach little attention to the study. Instead of studying, they spend a lot of time in other activities; I think it is not rational. Secondly, college is a convenient place to learn various skills such as instruments, programming, acting and so on. When we have those skills, we may have more opportunities to perform ourselves, which can extrude us out among the competitors. Work experience and practical ability is also important, when you possess them, we can adjust our quickly from college to society. In addition, college is a wonderful place to build the interpersonal relationship. As we know, the colleges have a lot of students unions and social groups, it means that we can meet plenty of people every day; thus, we are likely to have a lot of friends, which may help us a lot in the future. Besides, there are also quantities of matches, therefore, we can learn to cooperate with others and be conscious of the importance of the teamwork. As far as I am concerned, when we enter the society, teamwork plays a vital role in our work and life. All in all, college benefits me a lot, I find myself changed a lot. College is just a small society, when we take good advantage of the college years; we are bound to lead a happy life in the future.