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As a student, i should work hard and listen to teacher carefully on the class.At the same time ,finish the homework immmediately.After class ,i should do all kinds of sports.such us,jumping ,running, swimming and so on. i can get alone well with my classmates.and hepthem whey they are in trouble.i am the people in good heart.
