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It's significant for us to create a green campus.Campus is the home for us to live at least 4 years,it's our responsibility to protect it. A green campus is not only green environment,but also we do save energies in campus.Green environment is that we can see green trees,grass or beautiful flowers everywhere.We couldn't see rubbish in campus.In the classroom,we should save energies by not wasting papers,because papers are made by trees.Trees are the protector for the earth. In canteen,we should save energies by not wasting food.We should buy the amount how much we can eat.The food we couldn't eat up will be throw away,if everyone of us waste a little food,there will cost a great energy loss.In dormitory,we should save energy by turning of lights and other electric applicants when there is none in the dormitory.It's not only the way of saving energy but the way ensure our safety. In order to establish a green campus,our students should pay more attention to the establishment.We can do the smallest things around us to save energies of our campus.If we have a heart to do it,we will make it.
