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Nowadays tourism had played the more important roles in the world, every countries had made some attractions for the tourist, even some countries depended on the tourism make their own business. So the tourism had make the counries or regions flourishing. But the harm followed with the tourists. A lot of people arrived the scenary had make the environment harmfully, the manager hadn't enough resources to deal with it. I think the mother nature is mighty, but the mother cannot bearing the unlimited destruction. All of us know that the science had became over-developed, the disaster have continued come. We have not the absolutely power to fight with nature, but we can do it better for own side, not just for ourselves, is for the next generation.
