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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,communication is of very significance in the modern society. Every single thing in our lives contains communication.For example,we have lunch or supper with our famlies.We need to know what they and how much want to eat.Without communicating with others,we find our lives difficult and hardship. However, a large amount of persons think communication wastes time and money,even if they think it is necessory to talk with their friends and families.There are two main reasons for this situation.On one hand,with the rapid development of economics, people are too busy to talk with others.On the other hand,communicating with others on certain issue is regarded as a depent man. As far as I am concerned, communication not only benefits to the person who is in the hardship and want to ask for help,but also helps persons to know each other.What's more,communication opens the gate of understand,which is the root of love.

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