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i like traveling very much.i remember the last vocation u went to the hangkong.it is a dood place .the people are very friendly and nice to me.there has pleasant weather and the food is delicious.Great climate,safe environment,friendly people,amazing culture mix,sound economy,fantastic scenery and beautiful ocean.In there i like to do some sports to keepfit and active.I recognize some fiends in there,they wat to come to beijing. It is contribute to our good party.