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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,communication is of very significance in the modern society. Every single thing in our lives contains communication.For example,when we have lunch or supper with our families,we need to know what and how much they want to eat.Without communicating with others,we find our lives full of difficulties and hardship. However, a large amount of persons think that communication wastes time and money,even if they think it is necessary to talk with their friends and families.There are two main reasons for this situation.On the one hand,with the rapid development of economy, people are too busy to talk with others.On the other hand,communicating with others on certain issue is regarded as a weaker. As far as I am concerned, communication benefits the person who is in the hardship and want to ask for help,meanwhile,it helps persons to know each other better.What's more,communication opens the gate of comprehension,which is the root of love.

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