文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
My best friend is a girl who is not beautiful but full of passion and has a good heart. She is kind and pleasure to help others. She is a good student who is always on top level in study. I like her and want to marry her. Studying with her is a exciting thing to me. I always miss her after I go back home. Recall the memory of staying together with her is sweet to me.