2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

judging from the tables, we can see that the pay is increased along with the education level.the college graduates average median weekly earnings is much more than high school diploma.at the same time,the college graduates' unemployment rate is lower than high school diploma. from above the unemployment rate in 2011,lowing high school diploma ,such as associate degree' unemployment rate 6.8 is lower than the average rate 7.6,but the some college,no degree and the low are not ;the same,the high degree's median weekly earnings is much more the average. we can think about that the high degree means more pays and uneasy unemployment.so we can hard work and study to achieve higher degree.