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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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It is clearly shown in the picture that, in the USA, the higher a person's degree is, the more he earns, meanwhile, the lower the opportunity that he can not find a job is. For example, one who has a Doctoral degree earns 3 times more than one who has less than high school diploma. At the same time, the latter has a 14.1% high rate of unemployment, which is the twice of the average 7.6%. Generally speaking, the phenomenon comes down to the following two reasons.On the one hand, people who receive high degree education have more ability to finish harder task, that is to say, they are desired more earnings. On the other hand, to get a higher degree, people usually devote much money and effort, as a result, the strive pays off later. We can learn something from the picture above. In order to get more earnings, it is time for us to study harder, so that we can get a higher degree. But the degree can not ensure a better prospect, we also should improve our practical ability.

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