2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段。

computer and man have closely connection.Is is essential for universities to learn it ,as you will be able to learn english from your teacher and practice with it. Then,you know,it is knowledge explosion age,if you want to have a contribute to your motherland and want to youself useful u should know the computer.Besides,if u want to realize the value of life u should master the computer knowledge as soon as possible.But u should not addicted to it.It will lead a negative affect to your healthy and study.