2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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It is widely acknowledged that computer has been more important and necessary tool in people daily life.It bring us not only advantage effect but also disadvantage impact. Computer bring us more convennient in our life.with computer we can get more useful materials online and we can work at home,shopping on line,watch any TV programs and so on.howevr,it also bring us more negative effect.some yong people tend to be addicted to computer ,they stay front of computer all day,play computer games ,waste lots of time. As a colleage student we should keep right attitude to computer.we can use it proportion time and means.