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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,if we look hard enough,we can observe tangibly that it shows that there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children,which is so called generation gap.It is estimated that 75% of parents don't like their children's unreasonable behaviors while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned. Perhaps we have no better way to appreciate the not uncommon phenomenon than by studying the three following influential factors contributed to it.In the first place,the two generations,having grown up at different times,have different likes and dislikes correspondingly,the disagreement often rises between them.In the second place,due to having little in common to talk about,therefore,they are not willing to sit face to face.In the third place,it is with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster that they are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas.To sum up,the main cause of the generation gap is that they are lacking communication and understanding each other. According to the above mentioned,we have no difficulty but can obtain the conclusion that it is high time that something was done upon it.Children should respect their parents.In the meanwhile,parents should show the understanding to their children.Only in these ways can we fill the generation gap,be parents or children.