2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Two tourists is on a boat and enjoy their holiday. But there are a lot of dead fishes and rubbish floating around them, which makes the visit uninteresting. It is usual for us to see the same situation when we are on tour. This picture has drawn our attention on environment. Because of our inappropriate behaviors, environment has become more and more polluted and the situation of nature is getting worse and worse, which will cause terrible problems eventually. As a result, human beings will suffer big catastrophes. So, it is necessary to take actions to save the nature. In order to protect environment, plenty of actions should be taken. Firstly, paying attention to environment problems is the most fundamental thing that we need to do. Government ought to play a main role in taking actions to educate citizens, such as broadcasting more public service advisements and so on. Secondly, harder and more detailed principles on environment protect should be set in order to provide people with right guidance. Last but not the least, protecting environment is every person's duty. we should work together to live in harmony with nature.