小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She is a beautyful girl. She has a big pair of eyes and black hair. She is a nice girl. She always help the old person. She can write good word and good english. She can dance. She always arrive the school the frist every day. All the student like to friend with her.