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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Recently,some students graduated from university tend to stay at home.Among these students,some of them have failed to seek a job in the market thousands of times,while others just want to be well-fed and clothed by their parents. With the development of the society,competitions in the job market have become more and more fierce.There are many reasons that lead to this phenomenon.As a saying goes:”natural selection and survival of the fittest”.The lack of competitiveness and a wrong job hunting attitude are the first factors to blame.when entering society,they have no experience,and they always aim high,wanting to get a job with decent income or enter the giants’company.That’s not realistic.what’s more,there are so many hardships in the society,such as economic recession,housing problems,which can be the stumbling blocks on their way to achieve career goals. From my perspective,the following methods may help.On the one hand,they should down to the road and strive for acquiring knowledge in order to enhance their competitiveness.On the other hand,relevant legislation and policies should be carried out by the administrations to help them get through the dilemma.Only with the methods above can graduates have a promising future.
