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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意下文中的句法错误,文章会很不错;作者词汇表达较恰当,也能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Some threat, like as price increases and dangerous under-investment in the network and infrastructure has been shown that the supply of water and the collection of sewage in private hands, which threatens the basic human right to water and sanitation and endanger human health and the environment. In order to better protect human rights and human health, Aquitania had to act the Water and Sewage Law of 2011, which provides that The collection, purification, treatment and distribution of drinking water to households and commercial entities and the collection and treatment of sewage from households and commercial entities will be operated by a public company which is owned and controlled in its entirety by the Provincial Government.” Therefore, The purpose of Aquitania’s act is to protect public morals and to maintain public order.

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