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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17371
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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作者在句法层面做的很棒;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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With the rapid growth of technology, an overwhelming majority of people depend on the computers, which has aroused the great concern. Quiet a few people are worried about that"the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer." Admittedly, there are a considerable number of factors account for such phenomenon, but the following might be the critical ones. First and foremost, considering the advantages of computers, people depend on computers extremely so that they are not desired to think. Moreover, there is no doubt that computers block the way of face-to-face interaction with people, which seems people are indifferent to others.Anyway, people are suposed to pay attention to the impact of computers. Accordingly, the problem mentioned above will be increasingly severe so that concern is desired and effective meassures are called for. I take the attitude that people are supposed to spend less time on computers and think by themselves. Only with these meassures taken, I argue, can be the chance of changing this phenomenon be promising.

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