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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

用户练习作文:

Spend less money does not mean you’re a smart consumer     In my opinion, paying less when we’re purchasing something by the way of collecting coupons, looking for group-buy deals as well as buying clothes in a sale does not mean you’re a smart consumer. Only when we buy something both in good quality and low price can we regard ourselves as a smart consumer.     It reminds me of several experience happened to me. For instant, once I had collected a lot of coupons of a canteen which was going to open as a new one. I went to the canteen with great wishes but I finally found out that I was wrong. In fact, the food in this canteen was not so delicious as they had printed in the coupons. Therefore, from then on I was disappointed with so called coupons.     Apart from that, a friend of mine once participated in a group-buy deal to design her haircut. However, her haircut which was made by the group-buy deal was worst than the one she used to wear.     What’s more, as the rapid development of technology, more and more people prefer shopping online. It cannot be denied that the clothes online are always in a sale,which is the main reason attracts thousands of hundreds of people to buy them. However, some qualities of these clothes cannot be guaranteed. Worst still, people always spend a large amount of money on the useless clothes.     In a word, a smart consumer is the person who purchases the goods in good qualities but low price. That is to say, spend less money does not mean you’re a smart consumer. Only when you use less money to purchase best qualities can you regard yourself as a smart consumer.

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