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Nowadays,there are more and more museums open to public freely.The propose of doing so is that people should enhance their interested in visiting famous paintings or other works in museums,nevertheless many people don't want to pay money to do it,so our museums should open freely. Although it's convenient to our public,it will bring some troubles.Firstly,there are too many people visiting the museums,if some people touch the famous works even destruct them will lead to great loss.Secondly, too many people go to the museum,they must leave their litter during their visiting,it will cost our cleaner a lot energy to clean them.Thirdly,if all museums are free to public,there is no profit for undertakes to hold the visiting,lest most people don't like to do volunteer work for people who they don't know. In my opinion,I think some museums which have good features but not the national heritage can limit visiting amount to give people free admissions.Also they can limit days,on Monday,Tuesday they are free and on the other days people should buy tickets to attend them.Only in this way,can guarantee our cultural relics' safety,museum's environment and undertakers' profit.