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2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:22浏览次数:6159
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题目 Free admission to museums
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1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题
3.你的看法?
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文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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Nowadays,there are more and more museums open to public freely.The propose of doing so is that people should enhance their interested in visiting famous paintings or other works in museums,nevertheless many people don't want to pay money to do it,so our museums should open freely. Although it's convenient to our public,it will bring some troubles.Firstly,there are too many people visiting the museums,if some people touch the famous works even destruct them will lead to great loss.Secondly, too many people go to the museum,they must leave their litter during their visiting,it will cost our cleaner a lot energy to clean them.Thirdly,if all museums are free to public,there is no profit for undertakes to hold the visiting,lest most people don't like to do volunteer work for people who they don't know. In my opinion,I think some museums which have good features but not the national heritage can limit visiting amount to give people free admissions.Also they can limit days,on Monday,Tuesday they are free and on the other days people should buy tickets to attend them.Only in this way,can guarantee our cultural relics' safety,museum's environment and undertakers' profit.

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