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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9793
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一��。

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Nowadays more and more goods are packaged excessively,such as the moocake,make-up,the valuable presents and so on.The reason of packaging excessively is partly due to the sellers. The excessive packaging can increase their productions's price,though the cost are very low.For example,making a mooncake is very easy and the cost is very low,but the price is very high because of excessive packaging.People are willing to buy it because the mooncake is the symbol of the Mid-autumn Festival.The other reason is the questions of reputation.The elegant packaging can make presents more honorable. In my opinion,I dislike the phenomenon.The excessive packaging may waste the resources and pollute environment.I hope people can build up a proper attitute toward the packaging and protect the nature,For goverment,they are supposed to improve rules and regulations for the excessive packaging.

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