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Nowadays more and more goods are packaged excessively,such as the moocake,make-up,the valuable presents and so on.The reason of packaging excessively is partly due to the sellers. The excessive packaging can increase their productions's price,though the cost are very low.For example,making a mooncake is very easy and the cost is very low,but the price is very high because of excessive packaging.People are willing to buy it because the mooncake is the symbol of the Mid-autumn Festival.The other reason is the questions of reputation.The elegant packaging can make presents more honorable. In my opinion,I dislike the phenomenon.The excessive packaging may waste the resources and pollute environment.I hope people can build up a proper attitute toward the packaging and protect the nature,For goverment,they are supposed to improve rules and regulations for the excessive packaging.