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the Advantages of Saving Money Recent years, contrast to the rapid economic growth, many people, especially students have habits of saving money in daily life.This phenomenon arises a hot debate in society. Some people deem that it is a mark of mean conduct.Others hold a view that it is essential for us to be careful for money.Well,I think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand,as we know that being thrifty is one of the traditional virtues.The virtue acts as an warning of the achievement of happiness in our daily life. Furthermore,once we encounter life crisis or economic depression ,our living environment can maintain normal or even we can do other important things and weather the crisis with the help of savings. Well, what is the matter is that students' realization of where their money come from. Students haven't the abilities to earn money and their money is given by their parents.Saving money can let them experience parents'hardworking. On the other hand,to manage money reasonably is a considerable skill in our whole life. Saving money is a feasible and practical way to learn and grasp the skill. By this skill,our life can be more cheap and interesting. If possible ,we can invest saving money into other financial filed ,like insurance,stock market and government debt which can help us attain more economic benefits. We have to admit that this behaviour also have disadvantages.Maybe our life quality will decline and internal demand can be affected.But generally speaking,there are more advantages than disadvantages of saving money. Believe that everyone can enjoy the process of looking for bargains to reach the goal of saving money. Please enjoy and keep the habit.