作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
At my father and mother's ages,their names are not so important for them.The name is just a title about a person,don't have a special meaning or something important.And during my parents' time,their names were meaning some kind of that they would be easy to raise,or the names were easy to remember and to call them.They are so different from nowadays. Nowadays,young parents will look up dictionary to find a nice name for their babies,and they will find somebody to analytic the names.In order to get a good name,they even try it on Internet.In their opinion,the babies names are important for them,because they think the name will have influence on their babies mysteriously,and will give their babies good luck through their whole life,and will make their babies have a wonderful future. In my opinion,the names are represented ones persons' title,which is not so important.We shouldn't be so superstitious about our names,and we should face up to them.Our life is in our hands,not by the names.