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don't wast money as a young girl , i haven't money .so i can't wast money . at fist : we should learn how to make money and collect money . on the one hand , you must plan to how to use money .as for me ,i have only 800 yuan each mouth ,however ,the money include mine life ,phone ,internet and cloth .so i must plan to ues money . in my oppion .it is important to plan to use money.
