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Saving money in an appropriate degree Under economy recession, most people began to pocket their money. They are sensitive to their financial expenses and gradually they are restricting their expenditure on necessities. But do saving money in such a way make us smart consumers? Some people may agree with that. However, at the point of my view,saving money should not outstretch our limits and saving money in an excessive way are detrimental to the stability and development of our economy. First, saving money should correspond to one's income and deposit. For the poor people, it is incorrect that they cut down their expenditure on necessities like food or clothes in order to save money while harming their health. And we have to realize there is no such thing as a free lunch. Sales are just another trick for merchants to gain fat margins. Therefore, you will be the one who spent more money for the same commodity than it is deserved. Second, saving money in an improper way makes the economy go to the wrong way. For all of us, especially for the rich, there are not adequate investments for the economy to shift from the recession if everyone refuse to spend money. And at the meantime, the rich hold the great proportion of social wealth, which is beneficial to solve the unfairness between the poor and the rich. Besides, it is unjustified for the poor and it hinders their development to get rid of poverty. All I mentioned above allude us that we should save money in an appropriate way and consider our abilities. As for the rich, I think they should be the main force to facilitate the development of economy and save more money to help the poor.