【题目要求】
Many people think cheap air travel should been couraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads toenvironmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion.
【题目翻译】
很多人认为我们应当鼓励廉价的飞机旅行,因为它给了普通人远行的自由。然而,另外一些人则认为这会导致环境问题,因此飞机旅行应当更加昂贵,以便减少人们的使用。谈论双方观点更给出你自己的观点。
【关键词分析】
cheap air travel
本题不是简单的飞机旅行的利与弊,而是问飞机旅行是否应当廉价。
【话题分类与题型】
本题是旧题,与2008年6月14日的考题完全相同,与2010年4月10日(见下)的考题也几乎一致。属于科技类与环保类的混合话题,题型为Discursive(Argumentation)。值得一提的是,最近考老题的次数较多,上一次考试(2011年3月19日)的考题与2008年11月15日的完全相同,因此提醒各位考生一定要重视对历年考题的复习。有意思的是,今天欧洲考区的话题同样是科技类与环保类的混合题型,同样是2008年的考过的旧题。题目是科技改变农产品产量与质量的利弊(详见本文最后)。
【话题评价】
环保类写作话题题库中有一个小分支是关于“交通工具”的。从2003年至今,这个分支话题共出现8次,其中2次是问汽车的利弊,6次飞机是否应该被限制(其余4道话题见下)。这些话题的基本思路都是相同的,缺点主要从环保角度去考虑。当然每个话题有不同的侧重点,同学需要认真对待。
【类似真题】
1. Some people think the recent increase in cheap airtravel brings benefits, while other people think it has drawbacksto the environment and the world's resources. Discuss both viewsand give your opinion. (100410)
2. Some people believe that air travel should berestricted because it causes seriouspollutionand uses up the world’s fuel resources. To whatextent do you agree or disagree? (060218)
3. One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a caruses in several years’ time, but theycausethe same amount of pollution. So some people thinkthat we should discouragenon-essential flights, such as tourist travel,rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extentdo you agree or disagree? (060325,080405)
【结构与思路】
本文属于Discuss both views and give youropinion题型,因此双方的观点必须都提及,缺一不可。但是结论上未必要折中,如果要支持一方的话,则选择驳斥另外一方即可。
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,文中有较多拼写错误;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Whether the air travel should be cheaper or pricier has evoked much controversy. Some people convince that the ordinary people will gain access to more benefits from declining the tickets price, by contrast, the argument held by others complains that they should pay more cost due to low fuel efficiency and the environment pollution. I am more supporting a cheaper flight, in spite of the fact that air travel has some drawbacks, its merits can not be denied. Admittedly, there are some disadvantage of air travel, and a higher price could limit the amount of passage-rs, as a result to decline the negative effects. To start with, the plane burns more fuel than a car when goes through by the same distence, which means more pollution. In addition, more fuel consumption means that aeroplanes exhause more amount of green house gas, which may lead to the warming climate. On the contrary, people have benafited so much from the development of aeroplane industry, nowadays,even a ordinaty person can afford a globle flight. Initially, people may spend less time to travel, which makes life more convenince and has made business more effciently. Secondly, it enlarges the trades, for instance, without plane, the people live in inland can never enjoy the fresh seafood. On the other hand, it enhances the communications between western and oriental countries, which makes the geography never be a barrier and makes the people living on earth never be isolated by distance. To sum up, air travel leads to more advantages than drawbacks. A low paid flight should be encouraged to benifite the common person.
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