考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,if we think hard enough,we can observe tangibly that it describes a not uncommon phenomenon that in recent years,it is with the development of science and technology that approximately 80% of all homes in China have a satellite TV,offering as many as 50 channels.Consequently,it has caused a heated debate on the impact of television on children.Many parents are worried about the impact of so many television programs on children. Although I would not go that far, perhaps I have no better way to appreciate the phenomenon by studying the three following influential factors.In the first place,it is with so many programs to choose from that children are not getting as much exercise as they should.Therefore,there comes a case that some studies have shown that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered ability to achieve in school.In the second place,the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies.Especially when the children are too young to judge what programs suit them. Indeed,we have no difficulty but can obtain the conclusion that these unique points can be connected to remind parents that they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children'TV viewing.Only in this way can children not be influenced.