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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Computer and Man Nowadays,with the rapid develop of advanced,more and more computers are commonly and widely used in our daily life.However,what worriest most of us is that the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but the man will begin to think like the computer. Firstly,in study when people came across the problem of homework,they would rather search the internet to find the answer than look for the books to find the principle,which makes people gradually losing the ability of thinking independently. Secondly,in work when people shoud hand in assignment without completement,they might copy the ideas from the computer,which makes us losing the opptunity of exercise. In conclusion,computer is just like a doubled-edged sword.With computer we might have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjou better-off life.However ,one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of it ,always being the master of it.

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