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Recently,the tourism has been a popular activity,with the people's living standard improving,more and more people go for a travel when they have enough time.In my opinion,the tourism will not bring harm to enviroment. Nowadays people's working pressure is more and more big,people need time to relax themselves,and take a travel is the best way to relax,and the scenic spots can improve the air quality,so tourism is necessary.Most scenic spots don't cut too many tree and change the eviroment they just pavage a little for people to walk,and in these scenic spots are ban driving,besides there are many sanitation workers clean up.So the tourism will not bring harm to the eniroment,I think. To sum up,the scenic spots is necessary,and it will bring benefit to the people.
