2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and more consumers are inclined to online shopping.With the development of network,online shooping has been a fashionable lifestyle.Now I will introduce some advantages and disadvantages about online shopping in details. On the one hand,it's very convenient for people to shop online.People can receive the parcels at home or school and so on.What's more,online shopping can save money and time.People who are busy working don't have extra time to shop in the shopping center and it can also save money. On the other hand,there are some disadvantages ahout online shopping.First,people may buy some goods which are not their favorite.Second,it's sometimes dangerous when people shop on the internet. In my opinion,the goverment should establish and improve the laws and rules of shopping on the internet.And the consumers shouldn't be crazy ahout online shopping and they are supposed to keep the safety awareness.And I believe that online shopping will be more and more popular in the future.