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Tom 邀请Wei Hong 参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Wei Hong的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说数学考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好给他写了封e-mail表示感谢。e-mail开头已写好。
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Dear Tom, Thank you inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go but I can't. My parents are being on a business trip. They will come back next month. I should take care of my grandmother, she was sick. My math exma will coming , so I can't go to your birthday party.
