2012年10月13日雅思大作文真题:如何看待社会多元化

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With the rapid development of technology, the distance between different people and different countries can be considered to become increasingly close. Some people point out that this kind of development would lead to the single world culture. Personally, I against this opinion, on contrary, I believe that this developed trend can help to communicate between each culture and generate multi-culture. There is no doubt that some development of technology make great contribution on connection with different culture. To illustrate, the Internet is a useful route to work on it. These days, people can understand foreign via look through the relative information online, even they directly look through foreign website. With the development of transports, people can also travel to foreign in short time, while it is probably impossible for people travelling to the other side of the earth without airplane or ship. And following the communication between different cultures, the local culture would become more diversity. For example, cooking culture. These days, people can have traditional Italian meal in China, and can fine Chinese restaurants in Britain. Admittedly, some customs has already vanished in the recently year. The development of technologies is not supposed to response for this situation. Initially, it should be agreed that not all of customs are good. For example, circumcision which have been described in several films. This behaviour is tradition culture, while an increasing number of countries have banned it and it gradually vanished. The modern technology works on it, because of this development establish a way to helping them understand outside world. However, the development of modern technology cannot be considered as the reason why this custom be vanished rather the civilization. To sum up, I personally think that modern technology can just be regard as a toll that serves to human being. It can play significant role on deliver and collect information, but it would make no contribution on helping people to make final decision. In the other words, modern technology cannot let people abundance their culture, even lead to single world culture.