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My views on online shopping As we all know, more and more people prefer to choose shopping online. It is obvious that shopping online becomes a trend. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages shopping online has. Let me tell you some about it. Here are advantages. Firstly, the goods online is very cheap,which means you can save more money. Secondly, there are a wide variety goods supplied for you to select. It sounds great when you have different styles clothes. Thirdly, it is so convenient that we needn't to go shopping which is very terrible and make us feel tired. As far as l am aware, it can't be ignored that shopping online exits some dis advantages. At the first place, we have no chance to try it. so when we dislike it after we buy it, we have to take times to do with this matter. On the while, we can't judge the quality of goods, which means we may be enjoyed terrible shopping online experience.
