拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the development of the society,then the students' pressures are increased.Every kind of accident is happened every minute in our daily life.The accidents are so normal for us,and we even don't care about them,so that the horrible accidents are happened around us.We even don't spare a minute to reduce them. The students' mental health are so important,because they are the future of our country,the impact to the society can't imagine.Our country depend on them.So their mental health are important for our country. The schools,as educate institutions,they should do something for their students,what they should do are to supply some place ,like Psychological counseling,to help the students who have mental problems.And improve the facilities about sports,because sporting is a way to heal mental problems. And as students we are,we should take care of ourselves.When we face some problems in our daily life,we should find a way to relax ourselves,like reading,singing,travelling and sporting,they are all very good way to let us feel good,and make us have health mental.