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Internet now becomes more and more popular in the world.It makes sense in many ways,such study,chatting,and business,ect.However,when it comes to interpersonal Communication,it will be another situation. In fact,Internet is the direct killer which breaks interpersonal.Someone said that we make more new friends through the Internet and attached more things,so that we can broaden our horizon.To some extent,it works.But it urged you to be distant with your true friends at the same time.you have less time to communicate,less energy to explain,because a part of new friends on the Internet are coming up with you.What's more,they can change your original ideas,which you kept believing before. In short,the Internet on interpersonal Communication is quite dangerous.We ought to get out of it,and make friends in the reality world.Only then can we live more comfortable.
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