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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Internet now becomes more and more popular in the world.It makes sense in many ways,such study,chatting,and business,ect.However,when it comes to interpersonal Communication,it will be another situation. In fact,Internet is the direct killer which breaks interpersonal.Someone said that we make more new friends through the Internet and attached more things,so that we can broaden our horizon.To some extent,it works.But it urged you to be distant with your true friends at the same time.you have less time to communicate,less energy to explain,because a part of new friends on the Internet are coming up with you.What's more,they can change your original ideas,which you kept believing before. In short,the Internet on interpersonal Communication is quite dangerous.We ought to get out of it,and make friends in the reality world.Only then can we live more comfortable.

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