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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1952
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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With the development of the society,then the students' pressures are increased.Kinds of accidents happened every minute in our daily life.The accidents are so normal for us,and we even don't care about them,so accidents happened around us horribly.We even don't spare a thought for them. The students' mental health are so important,because they are the future of our country,the impact to the society can't imagine.Our country depends on them.So their mental health are important for our country. The schools,as an education institution,then they should do something for their students,what they should do are to supply some places,like Psychological counseling,to help the students who have mental problems.And improve the facilities about sports,because sporting is a way to heal mental problems. And as students we are,we should take care of ourselves.When we face some problems in our daily life,we should find a way to relax ourselves,like reading,singing,travelling and sporting,they are all very good way to let us feel good,and make us have health mental.

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