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Some people claim that traveling in group lead by a tour guide is the best way since you don't need to prepare a lot of thing and just enjoy the landsccape following the tour guide. But in fact, travlling led by yourself is more meaning Admittedly, people will benefit a lot from travelling in a group led by a tour guide. For one thing, you accompany with many team members, which make you feel not lonely. If you spend long time on the road to the landscape, talking each other or playing games is an effective way to kill time and dispel sense of lonely. Aslo, you can enjoy a journey easily and leisurely. As the tour guide will get ready all the things such as journey routes, restaurants and buses for you, what you need to do is only just follow the guide. Clearly, it is the group led by the guide more a tour more enjoyable and easier. However, every coin has two sides. Even though travelling in a group led by a guide has the advantage of being easy, leisuer and enjoyable, I believe it has downsides too. For exzmple, there is no guarantee of choice. if you choose to follow a group led by a guide to have a journey, you can only enjoy the intended landscapes planned by the guide, others, no way. Furthermore, joining in a group makes the tour lack of sense of satisfying, thrill and success, which is inherent in the travelling by oneself. A guide can instill much knowledge abou the landscape, but you are just a recipent. If we travel by oursevlves, we need to conquer the difficulity facing duing the journey and explore the unknown world, the sense of excitement brought by which is irreplaceable. For this, how can you assume that the best way to travl is in group led by a tour guide? There is nothing wrong with travelling in a group. The best choice, though, is to travel by yourself, experiencing the sense of success