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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
As is described in the above picture, all kinds of culture are boiling in the hot-pot, tasty and nutritious. It is implies the significance of culture diversity. The phenomenon lies in the following three points. Firstly, the internet is prevailingly used in recent years, which allows us to communicate with people all around the world and learn most different things from them. As a result, more and more people are highly influenced by the cultural interaction. Secondly, we encounter a world-wide economic competition and in order to deal with that big challenge, we must hold our open policy. Last but not least, every culture has its own advantages. Exchanging culture is necessary. As far as I am concerned, different culture will learn from each other. We should have an open mind to accept the trend and do our best to welcome it. However, every coin has two sides. So, more attention should be placed to recognize the bad side of it and fulfill the harmony of society.